Voice over
After a long debacle and discussion we unanimously agreed to scrap the idea of a voice over, we felt that it would take away from the surprise of Aaron realizing the camera is extant being and it would it would diverge from our original goal of being coherent.
New scene addition
We continued with this because we knew with the addition of more dialog and more cinematic techniques we could possibly make it more fluid and tad bit more pleasant to watch. With this it establishes a reason why we stop so abruptly; Aaron supposedly forgot his wallet, but the hidden goal to introduce himself.
Excerpt from the scene
New Script
With the loss of our female character related to uncontrollable external issues, we had to essentially amend the entire script to meet these new conditions. With this we made Jacob Aaron's wingman to their double date. Aaron then with the corner of his eye sees a camera man sitting nonchalantly in the back of his car, and immediately devices a plan to meet this invisible figure.
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