Constructive criticism received from fellow peers & Revisal solutions

The reception that my film received was as expected, it was a quality product but in terms of polish it was lacking. They commented on the high level of filming and the exotic establishing shot that is immediately ushered in our film, unfortunately, that is the only positive thing the class was able to note. They said the plot lacks fluidity and is a tad ambiguous, since the center issues of film are not identifiable; a question that constantly got brought up was "why do you suddenly stop?", at that point I knew the film did not do a good job at explaining the plot, so i devised a set of plans.

Solutions

• Add a voice over to serve as a prelude and give more in the way of a back story to the film 
• Have the female character be the reason for the stop, so that way random halt would not be seen as impromptu.